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May 18, 2007 | 1:42 PM EDT

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Here's my very first submission/movie. It's based on this one dream I had. This may suck quite a bit but this is only 2 weeks of training and 1 week of work. I worked on this for 12-20 hours though so I guess it isn't a full week. Just on and off work. This may look like a trailer but it ain't. It's more like...I didnt feel like creating a 1+ hour flash movie based on the entire dream. What you'll see is just highlights from it. Haha, don't think I'm mental though. I just have wild dreams like these. I might make it into a full 1+ hour length movie though, depending on time and stuff.

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Udate:
After watching it 3 times, I realized that the song isn't in sync with the action, so I redid it and now resubmitting it.

Reviews


MidnightDragonMidnightDragon

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars May 19, 2007

My thoughts

lol kinda reminds me of my first flash movie not very pretty... But you gotta start somewhere. This does kinda suck but not as bad as alot of the junk I have seen and as a first attempt at flash its not all that bad. Your timing isnt quite right I had trouble reading everything before it went on to the next block of text and I can read pretty fast so you might want to improve on that part. Other than that simply making more movies and playing with flash and you will be putting out good content in no time. Flash takes practice jump on a torrent search engine and look for flash 8 total training it is the best way to learn flash ive been able to find.



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Rated 4 / 5 stars May 18, 2007

nice!

cool video! its really intersting



crackleby585crackleby585

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 18, 2007

Not bad

I loved the music, nice play on lil john



snl621snl621

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 18, 2007

yep

First flash??
Wow, with a bit more practice, I see you on the front page.


dave-kim responds:

Shoot. Now I'm too afraid to make another cuz I might dissapoint a lot of people if my next one sucks! haha


Gabriel1984Gabriel1984

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 18, 2007

fairly good

a really well done piece consdering how much time you spent on it
also i put a 3 for humour becauseat the begining with monk he just seemed really small ,like cute chibi small compared to the background