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is good second part of world of magic
needs some work
ok, dont think im harsh for voting low, im just trying to make sure everyone improves on their work, first of all iv just had a quick look over your other works and i think i can saftly say... this was kinda based on hellsing, the eyes ect... apart from that you need to improve on the overall construction of the moive, there was a few times when loops did not repeat properly and small things like that, try to make the people more refinded instead of changing the quality of them every five seconds, try to keep them constant otherwise it gets quite confusing, on that note, making lots of things happing at once is good for small parts but having it contantly doing it is very confusing, i think alot of people will say they had no idea what was going on, graphics needs some work, im not saying its rubbish or anything, just improve in that area, style is a bit "iv just watched hellsing and want to make a flash" so try to create your own, sound quality is good nothing to add there, violence if you wanted some might have been a bit more understandable then randomised attacking, interactivity speaks for its self and i found nothing humorus... overall it needs some work, i il look forward to seeing later flash animations from you.
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