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Alright guys, this is my 2nd submission today. I didn't finish this in 2 hours, I finished it in 2 weeks. So, just watch it to the end, and review. And this was experimental, with lots of new things.
Production Time: May 3-16, 2007
Hey man, you put effort into it. It wasn't that great but I think you deserve credit for trying and making something that was actually fun to watch.
Good luck in the future.
Thanks man. This is my experimental series, so next would be very smooth, shaded Frame By Frame. Don't expect to see it this summer.
Its good animation but it lacks humor. The only funny parts were when the dog attacked the man. and im using funny in the most platonic way possible. There wasn't even any violence when the dog attacked the guy just allot of high pitched screaming.
I thought that would symbolize how hard he screamed.
its ok, you need to work on some sounds and stuff, but its good for starters. It was pretty funny how the dog was repetitive on attacking the guy.
Yea, for some reason the dog doesnt like him.
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