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First ever flash, and I failed. I'm writing this as my flash career hopefully starts. Someday I'll look back and smile at my first ever attempt.
Please leave me reviews I love to read them and get help!
Well, I liked the animation and all, but have you checked your microphone recently? I could barely hear a thing.
not bad for the 1st try
The sound job needs to be fixed a bit, the voice overs can barely be heard, the animation for a 1st time job was pretty good but overall much work can still be done. There wasn't any truly animated fighting, to test how good you are with character fluidity and flow. As far as the story goes. Supernatural angel vs demon thing is probably the most overplayed thing in animation thanks to anime, which by going by your character design influenced your drawing. So as far as story line creativity, I can't give you props on an old idea. Then again it is your 1st flash. There is a potential with your work though so its not all that bad. Of course from reading other people's post you criticized the heck out of another artist's work. Of course if you take into the length of the media, and the increased amount of detail and setting work put into the flick in addition to decent voice quality, decent character flow movement, and the fact that the physcial combat scenes actually move together as one. This blows your attempts out of the water. Oh and their story line is much more creative then the way depicted thus far in your film. Due to the complexities of the plot and the themes the flash movie represnets. your film is good enough not to be banned though. It will be interesting to see how your next effort will be.
I came to watch this because I was actually expecting something good after reading your review on Minushi 16. I'm usually not the type to retaliate on somebody that gives a harsh and unfair review, but like I said I was actually expecting to see a pretty damn good animation from you. The animation wasn't horrible, but you have no room to talk. Everythin g was too jumpy, the movements were unnatural, and many things were out of proportion. The sound quality pretty much ruined everything decent. You have a lot of work to do before you go making yourself sound like an ass again. Better luck next time.
You were complaining about Minushi HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! THATS SOOO FUNNY!!!!!
Seriously though, you can't be so Hippocratic, It was alright, but could have been longer :|
nice graphics .
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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