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Super Awesome Clock Short 6
The Story of a Wigger
-Great joke, love the way you cut out to leave the punchline said but not said (And Lol @ The Idiots who didnt understand that)
-Could move a little faster, doesnt take quite that long to read or hear
-The bobbing is a little annoying.
-You made me spray pepsi out my noise onto mah keyboard xD
I don't know where to start...
I have multiple things to say about this submission.
1. Speed up the scenes. We can hear and we can read quicker than that.
2. Stop making the people bob up and down, it is pointless.
3. The animation wasn't bad, props.
4. The ending is horrible. A fire hydrant mixed with Stephen Hawking? Change those few things and you got a 3 or a 4.
Why do you end this suddenly? That will ruin your score.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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