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Lucky Penny Part1

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May 4, 2007 | 2:55 PM EDT

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roflmaomgodanmroflmaomgodanm

Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow,i like this one alot

HOLY SHIT,this is a very good flash,and ill be looking for the second one,U DA BOMB(marios ok too)



grodjy-mcgrodjgrodjy-mcgrodj

Rated 4 / 5 stars

nice

it was a laugh
(jebus the guy before me said a lot)
i'll look out for the next one (I wont rearly because by the time the next one is out i'd have forgotton bout it o well...)


ghostmonkey2 responds:

Thanks, it was a pleasure to make ^____^


Jdietz43Jdietz43

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not, bad, not great either.

Let me see if I can give you some advice. (you dont have to take it, just leting you know what I think)

First of all, next time change the graphic that goes next to the "Watch this movie" part, the current one is just a picture of the preloader with the word Penny typed in. It doesnt give the best impression of your work. I came into the flash expecting something worse than what It was. You never want that feeling, youll get worse scores and responses. So do anything, anything else, just not something like that. Even a picture of the coin would be better.

Songs are great in a flash, but you managed to slip in about 4 or 5 songs in roughly a minute, thats kind of alot. Dont get me wrong, songs are great, but you dont have to overdo it.

The funny style of some words in the speech boxes. That was cool, definatly KEEP THAT. Keep the blurring in the background for the clouds and blocks, that had a nice effect.

Double check your spelling and read it out loud to yourself, or get someone else who you know would notice to check it. Goomba has two o's, you spelled it "Gomba"

And one last thing, try not to use real pictures as much as possible, like the realistic gun that Mario used during the last fight scene, Im not sure why, but it just takes something away from the flash.

Good luck on the next one, Ill be watching.


ghostmonkey2 responds:

I can easy say you realy helped me, thanks! ^.^


Gabriel1984Gabriel1984

Rated 3 / 5 stars

my god bowser can dance...

...and it seems he likes the chicken dance i think my eyes a bleeding,
also for some reason i got the idea that mario stopped behind to bushes to take a slash
please continue creating and improving on your style


ghostmonkey2 responds:

I will, Thanks!
P.S. Bowser suck dancing!