Score: 5
"Nice concept, but needs more."
date: May 3, 2007
Okay, first the good news... your music is absolutely lovely, and I like the teeny-tiny story. Cute, charming, and it's got ice cream in China.
BUT:
All right, the look's kinda ecch. I've seen worse, though.
But what really bugged me is the lack of rhyme or reason behind it. Why a wormhole? Where did it come from? Why between China and wherever that carrot is? Why did the banana get the cone? Is there any way for that poor carrot to get it back? Or at least get another one like it? Will those two ever meet?
This thing is begging for much more. My advice: expand your musical piece a bit, figure out a story to go with it, and take it the full measure. Don't stop with just "Fin," make it a whole fish!