Ugh

This isn't much more than an animated gif. Theres no plot, no game, no nothing. Its a good start so you gotta DO something with it. Its really cool and you should make a story or animate a fight. I don't mean to sound crabby I am trying to give constructive criticism so you can improve.

try making a flash

you'll do good ^^ try and make a flash then e mail me when (or if) you do ok?

well i like it

making flash is hard and takes time,so mr.colmcknight make jour oun movie
il vote this a 5

jee i'm seeing this

that it didn't take u long to do. the graphix on him were great but that's all he does. if he had said something then it would of gotten better reveiws and scores

wicked

he's sooooooooooooooooo hot.he looks like his been doing something he's a little out of breath.he was probably doing it with me.i want him bad!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx4 him.