Score: 4

"K"

by: milinko959

date: May 30, 2007

^^Good Points^^
I think you have some skill in this type of thing, especially with what you did on this one. The animations you made were believable and flowed well. They didn't look too fake.

^^Needs Improving^^
You need to do a bit more with this. As I said before about other movies, you need to change the lighting to make things a little clearer. Also, you could add some more clothing into this. You didn't really do much in this one.

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Score: 3

"Too short by far"

by: Coop83

date: May 26, 2007

Something like this really needs to be worked on as a longer flash. Maybe take a break between the different outfits and actually bring in something like a big pencil to draw them on you, for example.

I do appreciate that you're decent at doing this, but for the sake of anything you hold holy, don't let your talents be held back - make a bigger statement, saying "Look at me, I can amimate this well!" A longer piece will allow you to show off a lot more. This is also another practise issue, as the more you do, the better you'll become.

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Score: 10

"That is cool."

by: kirbynator

date: May 3, 2007

You are pretty good at mixing life with toons.

PS: I'm his collaborator!

Score: 10

"LOL-ROFL-LMFAO"

by: wolfinator-xalt

date: May 3, 2007

That's a good Idea you got there, dude!

Score: 9

"wth"

by: Legandery-Fox-Guy

date: May 3, 2007

ok that was kinda creepy but im still gonna vote nine cause i know how happy youll feel if this crap passes ^_^