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Apr 30, 2007 | 4:30 PM EDT
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EDIT: OLD, PLZ IGNORE.
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As promised, pico's school the movie is out for pico day! i worked hard on this, please enjoy, vote and review :D

again, for the sake of being part of pico day 2007, i decided to divide this again... i take too much time on details, backgrounds, tweens, everything, and its hard to do the entire game in a single file with little time... wait, i had 12 months to prepare for pico day, right? well i was working on other flashes and many things froms school... i started working seriously on this a month and a half ago, so im really sorry i didnt started working before :C

so what comes next? maybe the third part, maybe something else.. im not sure yet.

Reviews


Goggleman64Goggleman64

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 30, 2007

Sequels are affected by what came before

It's easy to forget this. Your flash skills are amazing, but you've got to balance them with some good storytelling skills.
The first part of this trilogy introduced the characters, and started the action. It needed to be long for all the exposition and such. Once I got through that, however, I was cravin' a long, soothing bloody righteous rampage, or at least some sweet, suspense-crammed action. Instead, I only got as much fighting as was in the first. It worked in the first because the story had gotten me interested; here, no such luck.
I think you'd get better ranking if you waited to release this work until you had the rest of the action that lies between Pico's awakening and his slaying of the red-haired guy. I also think that you could make the action hella more interesting by making each fight longer and giving Pico and his enemies different strategies and ways they attack. So, you've got two options right there - make one flash where Pico just mows down every henchman in his path, or keep making single flashes for each individual fight, and just make the fights really, really cool.
As a rather patient viewer, I advise the second option, because it makes for higher quantities of enormously more awesome flash. Then again, I don't have to make it. (grin)
Later,
Goggleman


Lalo responds:

hey thats a good idea actually, but it would actually be 4 short flashes and people would like to see a bit longer movies from me... and in my opinion there was enough action in there, thanks alot for the review man :)


slashhslashh

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 30, 2007

Quality over Length

Who cares if it was short? it was great!


Lalo responds:

length is kinda important too... i need to balance both


altarealtare

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 30, 2007

awseome

A bit on the short side, but well made and Alucard looked like shino from naruto lol



LuisLuis

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 30, 2007

awesome but too short

I think you really should buckle down and do the whole game as a movie rather than installments.. its such a cool idea and the execution is so well done, it was such a cocktease to just taste the tip of your flash cock. Anyway i gave high marks for the sound.. it is a great example of what a difference well placed sound makes .. really keeps the store suspensful and engaging. I think that some of the angles and effects feel forced.. while cool to use i think you should use effects that make sense. the bullet time didnt feel that necessary and actually seemed to slow down things too much. also when Cassandra and pico cross paths i think that the crop on the stare should have not had a blur on it. i think you really get a better sense of the tightness of the stare with a crop thats razor sharp. you can really feel the tension of the screen squeezing on the stare of these characters..
Great job lalo, you have alot of raw talent.


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Lalo responds:

thanks luis, im happy you reviewed and noticed these little details that make an animation come to life, yeah i know its short, and dividing it its a pain in the ass for viewers, once im done ill put them all together in a single flash file and see how it looks... part 3 will be neat :)


HooglyBooglyHooglyBoogly

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 30, 2007

I liked it

I really liked what you did in this movie. The fight scene with the blue guy was very nice and I like how you included the shield barrier blocking all the bullets. Also, the beginning part when Pico had the smeared blood on his arm was pretty cool too. The only thing I disliked was the background music. It didn't seem to fit the flash very well. Other than that you did a very, very good job and I am looking forward to your next submission.