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I've made this movie for the Pico Day 07. Hope you like it. Please vote fair and watch the whole movie.
The biggest issue was definitely the sound, short bursts of SFX here and there but no talking. It wasn't TERRIBLE but honestly I just didn't like it. Maybe I'm just voting harder on these Pico Day entries due to the huge amount of them that there will be but I just wasn't impressed by this and don't think it has what it's going to take.
:D:D:D PICO :D:D:D
Lol, you spelt almost everything wrong. And I wish you would have added some voices, It gets annoying after awhile. Other then that, great flash. I voted five, cause I'm easy like sunday morniiin!
man. please make it with speech couse half of us are thiking, its rather quiet. not meaning to be fussy but in the end bit you mispelt flammable. but it was quite good. i voted 3.
Not bad at all...
One thing I WOULD recommend, though, is fixing a lot of your grammar, especially during the ninja scene. It was horrendous, and ironically, the source of those 2 points of humor.
Also, I'm not sure if you're aware of this, but on the lower right, just above the letterbox, during the first scene, there's an invisible (yet still clickable) button there that starts the movie over? I don't know if that was intentional or not, but you may wish to fix it.
Anyway, not bad overall. I did like the way you drew Pico through most of the scenes... You did pretty well.
thx, I knew that I'll have grammatical mistakes (I'm not English (or American))
"Fix it.........no,fix it.......seriously dude,fix it.......*slam* I TOLD YA TO FIX THE BLOOD BUT YOU WOULDN'T LISTEN!"
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