Score: 9

"very well done"

by: animatorjones

date: May 9, 2007

this piece shows that you have serious potential and that you will be rising up as a great animator one day (if you chose to continue)

it has a great feel to it, a somewhat unfinished look but for your first it's excellent.

keep with it, you'll do great.

-jones

Score: 8

"Wonderful first!"

by: Skaijo

date: April 29, 2007

+ I really like the quality of the animation--you're obviously a very talented artist who was introduced to flash.

+Nice pallete, very controlled first flash.

- The text at the beginning of the animation went by a bit too quickly for me to read. I'd suggest allowing the text to reamin on the screen for a little while longer--especially when there's spelling errors (I'm not sure if they were purposely left in there or not for a sense of style, but it makes it all harder to read for the time given).

+ I love the stop animation scenes with the couple on the couch. This scene really has some great atmosphere. Excellent choice with the music as well.

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Even without the first flash attempt status--this is an excellent animation that really ended with me wanting to see more, which is always a good thing. What things you still need to work on are minimal--you're already a great in my book. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Score: 10

"So true..."

by: Apnkshoedmongoose

date: April 29, 2007

I think this goes with the saying: You don't know what you got until it's gone.
anyways, nice work! i want to see more!

Score: 7

"Nice work"

by: MariniyaKaos

date: April 29, 2007

Very nice for a first attempt. I especially like the visual style, and nice music too. Maybe you could develop a more complex story next time. I´m looking forward to it.

Score: 8

"Don't listen to mr.snakey"

by: devilchrono

date: April 29, 2007

He doesn't know what he's talking about. The Graphics are nice the sound flows with whats going on, And it has alot of style goodjob. I want to see more.