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This is a movie about logic.
i LOVE it. so simple and funny.
Just like your review!
:D Yay for clear and rational thinking !!!
Nice one, and after seeing all your flashes, I noticed that your humor is probably the only humor that actually makes sense on newgrounds. Period.
I thank you for your comment, but i don't think that's the case.
A wonderful way of thinking
I love this piece for the humour and for the fact that the logic is something that you can barely argue with. The introduction was funny, if a little crude, talking about how everything for this piece was either begged, borrowed or stolen, enabling you to make such savings and pass them on to the consumer.
With some of the points that you make for the actual logic, I would like to bring the following to your attention:
1) The human bladder is much like a balloon - while strong enough to contain itself, it will grow and shrink with direct correlation to the amount of fluid contained within. Have you considered kidney stones could be causing such a blockage. How did it go with your doctor?
2) Ninja Powers = The One. I love this concept, though you should surely have considered that there is one more thing to consider about Ninjas - they are invisible against a black screen. Perhaps consider telling us all that since the ninjas could not be seen, you have painted them in bright colours, to make them instantly recognisable.
3) Cowboys. One thing greater than cowboys would be Chuck Norris, since he owns most things internet. Perhaps a little aside there would have just dragged this on a little further for even more laughs. Say 40 / 30 / 17 / 13, perhaps?
With regards to the animation, I would suggest that you do something to work on the background around the characters - I clearly saw the boxes around everything, which was a shame - you've got some good animation techniques, it would be a shame to spoil them with something like that.
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Chuck Norris is a cowboy ninja multi classer. Everyone knows that.
i liked that one, its smart, funny and very well set out.
Did you do the voice yourself?
Smart? I'm rarely accused of such a thing. I don't like it and refute it.
Im really not sure of how to review this, i just wanted to do it because i found the video quite funny.
It would be nice for me to make a flash kind of like this, you know, all creativity, and just simple graphics (Though that horse was truly a piece of art) but i cant do even that because im too lazy... I have thousands of projects that i started and never finished.
Oh, and for the review itself, i wont say anything about the graphics because you probably dont care and as i said im not sure of how to review a monologue. I just put a nine, because i though it deserved and nine.
Hm, now that i think of it, this wasnt to much of constructive review, but at least you know of someone else who likes your stuff. Good luck in life.
Thank you very much.
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