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Iraq: Holy War v 2.0

Leave a review when you're done, so I can get some feedback. Thanks for all the positive support from the first two - check them out if this is your first experience of it. If you want to be updated of when my next releases are, add me to your fav authors and I'll PM you personally when I make something new.

On another note, I'm curious to see if anyone gets the joke at the end. It's a little obscure, but I'm really trying to push this series in new directions, and I really think I did. This is probably my favourite so far - it went through so many rewrites and edits though, it took about two weeks, it's insane.

I don't know how to make a website, but I'd like to, so if any of you guys want to help me out with that it'd be awesome.

Reviews


yoshidude444yoshidude444

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

good.

I would get banned if I told you the web site where you make web sites...



FleshDizzleFleshDizzle

Rated 4 / 5 stars

haha its wjwd

lol the sign at the end had me rolling. i love this series, it reminds me of growing up in a christian school, and being the only one with questions.


Cambo responds:

oh I was such a dick at school's religion class. I couldn't stand our left-leaning "I'm cool just like you guys see we're best mates" teacher trying to justify why all homosexuals are going to Hell.

Ask heaps of questions, but don't ask them to be a prick. Ask them because you've thought about it a lot yourself and you don't understand it: if you do that the questions will write themselves.


Bahamut-DracoBahamut-Draco

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Simple, but effective

See, the sad part is that there ARE those who fall under this stereotype...
You've demonstrated that idea perfectly. The short and quick nature of these only adds to your point even more.
Excellent job...and I hope, that if a few extremist Christians see this, they understand what makes them different from a true disciple of Christ.

...though, I doubt there's any hope for people like that to even consider watching these. Sadly enough.



ALLCAPS42ALLCAPS42

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hmm....

I find it amusing that anyone could possibly be offended by this, and I'm religious. It seems like you're attacking a personality that exists among religious types, not quite the religion itself.

For example, your atheist character is witty, logical, and seems to be a nice guy, but your christian character is stupid, obstinate, and he's got a funny accent. Like when he says, "Ah luk after MAH wimmens," i just bust out laughing, because you've got to be a bit more subtle than that! I mean really, why not say, "I think Christians are inherently illogical and stupid!" That's the only complaint about this whole short, the way that your characters are so...just so typical.

The atheist is just so likeable, and the Christian is just so annoying. If you're implying that there are these types of figures in Christianity and atheism, I'm with you, man, all the way. But if you're implying that all religious folk are warmongerers and ignorant, then I'd say that you must know some (pardon the profanity) godawful people. '_^

Could you imagine it, though? The President tells the public on March 19, 2003 that "we have evidence to believe that Iraqi men are mistreating their women, and we have offered sanctions and diplomacy, but they still mistreat their women, and so we had no choice but to bomb them."
"Erm, Mr. President, could you elaborate on the evidence?"
"Well, John, they're Muslims."
"Oh, I see. That...explains it."
Certainly just as factual a reason as any that have been given supporting this war. XD

In conclusion, very well thought-out, not offensive at all, and keep it up! You've got my support, I, a practicing Muslim. All I've got to say is, don't think so bad of us. I'm not sure which religious person inspired your Christian character, or if there was any person at all, but we're not all like that. Most of us aren't. Honest to God.


Cambo responds:

This is the most literary review I think I've ever received. I'm pretty sure you understood the flash, so I guess you're just joking about the personality that exist within religious circles as "stupid, obstinate and a funny accent".


shad0wpyrashad0wpyra

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Intelligence is lacking.

It is amazing to see how some people can lack the intelligence and common sense to keep quite. Honestly how can people support a war that isn't even about morality it is about greed and belief that others are heathens for being a different religion at the same time these same religions turn around and say taking life is bad. I commend you for making the effort to point out their short comings. Good job and please please don't stop.