Score: 1
"overall 1 but im being generous"
date: April 20, 2007
ok, alot of criticism for this movie... the eyes were too beady, the wer too black for the character, the colours that you chose were off, (grey?? come ONNN).. anyways the storyline confused me, the beginnign needs improvement, the ending needs more of a punch, the character develepment needs some imroving. overall a poor performance here, but there is always room from improvment right. im not saying stop making flash videos, im saying take my advice, make someadjustments and then youll be on your way to success.
Author's Response:
For the colors, he was black and grey becuase he's an emo. There wasn't really a storyline. But thanks for the review!