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Apr 13, 2007 | 5:26 AM EDT

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In the last issue Super Dooper Man was left to face a huge COLONAL brain. This issue sees Super Dooper Man begin his battle against the COLONAL and unlock a new fighting form. But is Super Dooper Man strong enough to defeat them?

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Again all helpful hints etc will be taken into account, and i'm even taking storylines for future issues, share your ideas with me please.

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InfernoX880InfernoX880

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well...

Firstly, you really shouldn't have changed the appearance of your character from issue 1 to 2. You definetly need to work on your animation, because in today's society, in order for a Flash like this to be good, it's got to be really good. Basic flash animations usually are meant to be funny.

I gave you a few points mainly because you put {The Traveller} in there. Still, things you could have done to make it better:
-Don't feel time as a pressure. The people on NG won't kill you if you don't have a due date. Take longer but make it good.
-Take some time to get a little better at animations.
-Don't make any more rapid changes to the character, keep him close (or relatively close if you want to make him look better) to what he is now.

The story has some potential, though I felt a little wierd seeing the DBZ-type thing...



Yami9900Yami9900

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

That was really good

A bit on the short side, but i can't wait to see #3. The music was excellent, along with the storyline so far. So, i give this 4 gravestones..... out of 5. Oh, i didn't know his name was harry. It might've been in #1, but i forgot if it was..


HolyDragon responds:

Hey thanks alot for the review.
I have alot of exams on at the moment so Issue 3 is on a suspected delay, but I HAVE started it, and something MAJOR is going to happen, thats all im saying ;)

Once again thanks for the review :)


Dark-DetailDark-Detail

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This is good.

I voted 5.
Becuase I could see (and hear) the DBZ influence, and I love DBZ. Where did you get that SoundEffect from DBZ? The part with Mary, (I assume his wife, or was his wife) was really emotional with that beautiful music playing, that was done perfectly. Mary's ghost could have been drawn alot better though. The sound and music was pretty good. And you used music from cornandbeans and I am a fan. Good job, and I hope you get your photoshop working again, that program is amazing....


HolyDragon responds:

Wow kooshty! cheers for the review man. Really cool of you.

But im sorry i really cant remember where i got the sounds from. Was a completley random site and i lost the link :(

Yeah i know, with my photoshop mary would have looked MUCH better.

Again thanks :D


chrismonsterchrismonster

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice one

It was better than the first and shows and improovment. i also know u did this really fast as uv only just ended your 1st one so to do all that is impressive.
good to see a story forming making more use of the cliff hangers

and maybe he used the car in the first one coz he likes the new car smell??

lol all that really needs work is the art as i know you can do better with a little time

well done


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HolyDragon responds:

LMAO great review m8 cheers.

And yeah my photoshop has run out n having trouble getting it back up n running so im limited to drawings done on fash atm :S

Thank Agai