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It's a Comic
Entertaining. Although I'm sure most Newgrounds members can't read, so....
I'd say they could, but they seem to have marked your review as helpful, so maybe they can't. Huh...
I did not enjoy it.
Thank you for your effort good sir.
You are welcome for it fine madam.
I am amazed. The art was fantastic, so nice choice on that. I really was kept on the edge of my seat as I read it. A part of me felt a bit scared, maybe just being a male seeing a truly vengeful side of a woman.
The characters are amazing though. They are nearly exact oposites, and that is what makes it interesting. Only thirteen pages and I was totally enthralled by a sense of horrified intrest. Sorry to keep goign on... I sincerely hope to see more of this.
For one billion dollars, it will.
I think that you could certainly do with adding a little colour to the proceedings - it would be like Sin City, with making the blood stand out, for example. I think that the drawing style is excellent and even the occasional regressions (Yaoi?) frames that look a little simplistic with the art are well placed for the effect.
It's not a bad plot and the characters are certainly there for the pervert vote in the audience :P I think that developing these characters would be a wonderful thing.
The covers were nice and I think that perhaps some sort of 'centrefold' where you see a wonderfully animate picture of the girls doing something like when Veronica ran the guy over in the car - do that like the cover art in full colour and you'll have a great impact, before continuing the story to a triumphant conclusion.
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I'm not sure why you're here.
id love to see more
great writer and very good with the quips. like someone said before me... "I'd be your stalker." .....if you would let me?
No. No I will not let you. If you tried to stalk me, I'd stalk you first, and you'd never find me because I'd always be behind you.
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