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Apr 9, 2007 | 4:11 PM EDT

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G'day NG.

So, what happens when a group of obesity camp escapees break into a chocolate factory and one gets hurt? well...lets just say hilarity ensues.

I made this flash working 18 hour days for 3 days to get this done for law class. the class loved it, and so should you, lest you want to feel left out.

Enjoy. and please make constructive reviews. because seriously, no one wants to see a post of 2934 letters in all caps and making no sense.

Reviews


WriggleWriggle

Rated 3 / 5 stars February 9, 2008

I liked it.

I thought it was really funny. especially the guy saying "I love the smell of pain." nice job i will give it a 6



Xx-Hoxinator-xXXx-Hoxinator-xX

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 9, 2007

Alright

It was pretty good. A good story line, it went for a bit long though, and you didnt even finish the flash. It would of been better if made into a series. You could improve in the spelling and grammar, it was shotty in some places. But overall good work.


Wolf-Raven responds:

ya thanks. most of this was done at 11 at night, so spelling was secondary.

thanks for the review


hopelesswonderhopelesswonder

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars April 9, 2007

Offensive, Fulgar, and surprisingly GOOD.

I thought that this FM was pretty offensive (even though I'm not fat I still feel their pain...) But it was shot with some style... I liked the animation... The graphics looked a bit sloppy (not dissing on you if that is your style), I like the sopranos introductory song... It was a great FM. Keep up the good work.


Wolf-Raven responds:

Thanks. that is my style, but it's very crude. if i had more time, there'd be shading. thanks


Death0men8Death0men8

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 9, 2007

Not bad

Look I know this wasnt the best graphics, and the funniest of stories... but i didnt think it was horrible.
Ive seen worse graphics (Jerry Jackson)
work on you mike, and drawings and plt...itd be a lot better.


Wolf-Raven responds:

thanks.


cyberpotatocyberpotato

Rated 0 / 5 stars April 9, 2007

i am going to make sure that this gets blamed

to me this flash is just saying that you want to see fat people in chains carrying around big boulders i find this very offensive. you are just making fun of the section of the human that just happens to eat more than you do


Wolf-Raven responds:

eh. each to his own.