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It looked good but I have no idea what's going on
Some promising elements in here. Overall though, I
I really liked the icons you had on the play-screen. Brilliantly simplified, great colours, hinting wonderfully to the forthcoming event.
I wasn't too keen on the actual movie. The narration was hard to understand for the most part and the big dude and backgrounds looked rather messy.
The shot with the map was decent though.
Some promising elements in here. Overall though, I didn't enjoy it.
Thank you (:
Solid and shiny, the perfect combination. Not much to say really, they were great and theres not many ways you could improve.
It was a ncie little short, it a little too short.
The music was good, but the computer voice let it down, I would try subtitles or voice-acting next time... Even if it is clocks.
Violence and interactivity:
Not much to say. No comments really.
Well it was funny...
That was a ncie short overall, I gave you a five for good measure.
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Clocks... Locks... Glocks... Docks....
Not to long ago, everyone hated eachother. But things somehow got worse when some guys spammed.
Only Irken Dock, nobody significant, could stop them. But when the internet needed him most, he went to a ski resort.
A week past and Doom and I found him, working on something important, and although he's a decent animator, he has a lot to learn before he can really do anything right.
But I believe... IRKen can save the internets.
I like how you used the avatar for this animation, it was quite good good and funny. The 3d map bit was really good and the graphics were quite good. The only problem was the sound, it was quite hard to understand it.
Subtitles may have helped but as you said before it could take up room. Why not just put words on screen without using a black bar so the word appear on the screen and you can change the text colour to suit the background? Also, if the speech was a bit more slow, it might be easier to understand.
Overall, nice animation, get the sound right and it'll be good.
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OK, thanks (:
Recording with a mic?
Sounds like recorded speakonia off of your computer with a mic, if thats true just register it, it's free
This movie was pretty good. The graphics were surprisingly good. You had some good three dimensional effects in this, and the storyline was kind of interesting.
The sound wasn't that good. The Speakonia was really low and hard to hear at some points, so you could have made subtitles or made it more audible.
Oh no, my copy is registered. Thanks (:
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