its ok...
its fun but like all the others said it does need work but u do got potencial keep at it soon ull maby make one of the nets most popular games;)
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Yeah, I made this during school. It's not the flashiest of games, and I kind of inserted that music last minute, so I'm sorry if it's not the greatest game ever made, but please, give it what it deserves. Took me several months to make, simply because actionscript's a bitch.
Now I don't need to log into your acc. at school
Look, for a first game, this is really good Daniel(this is me Dylan btw). Tis definatly not the best, but it's addicting and I'll play it daily :)
Needs work but...
...i'm not the kind of person who tells artists to add this or add that. A flash is your creation and if you didn't add this or that, well that was your preference. Really liked this game and I see potencial for your work. The cannon reacted well and there was good collision detection. Very unpolished work yet fun anyway. Originally was a 3/5 but i'll give you a 4 . You need to keep at it..it'll come...
i liked it
the only thing it needs is no song still going when u restart. but i gave it a 5 because i liked it
Clouds-Apprentice responds:
Yeah, sorry about that. I'll work on it to try and stop that from happening.
needs alot more work id be happy to help in anyway
theres no rapid fire
there is only one type of fire
the movement isnt smooth u need to detail the shooting angles more
suggestion on enemys maybe add sum that can fly from the sides and then crash downwards to the middle
the cracks in the ice are dodgey as fuck if u wana kno how to draw them better talk to me on msn and ill give u a basic example of shadeing and 3d effects by drawing in 2d so it will look more realistic the igloo needs shadeing to show the bricks more life like
the sound was bad add more sounds like death sounds for larger penguins instead of constant regular sized ones id suggest resizing the whole project to look taller instead of so wide so u can see more enemys comeing down at rapid speeds
better menu it looks really dodgey
another suggestion would be a ice brick but with a jet pack on the bottom of it that floats around left to right randomly as an upgrade but is only able to stop one enemy and u can buy it at a cost or maybe 3 but show damge on it like put cracks on it for each hit it takes appart from that i think its a great idea keep working on it and it will be great
Clouds-Apprentice responds:
Okay, I'll keep some of those in mind, but, keep in mind, this is the first serious thing I've ever done with flash, nevermind actionscript, so it's not exactly going to be the next "Pico" yet.
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