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uuumm...yeah. i finished this flash around x-mas 2006.
i think it was too big before, but i learned how to compress files. so here.
reviews would be nice guys!
The graphics, entertainment value, and compression are what you need to be improving on. Because the this really bored me, no offense.
the next one is a lot better. it has better graphics and more sounds
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defiently worth watching. only problem was the long load time, ya gota learn how to compress things better than 7 kbs. or else people wont vote well. but all in all, pretty funny and entertaining. good job.
yeah, i was disapointed in the load time.
but it was my first time compressing.
i look forward to ep 2
i like it so far. the animation is ok. i like the music choices and the way u make it like a goomba version of mario world. keep it up.
my animation has improved since then.
i'm planning on using different remixes each episode also.
i'll make more angles for the characters during scenes that involve talking and stuff.
i tried to make it like a mix of the original side scrolling super mario games for nes and snes, but with some new twists. i'm glad you caught that! ^_^
was a pretty good flash
heres some pointers if u want em
- try and create more than one angle to the character,
- for later flashes, try to make the sound be streamed, (try to find a tutorial for that)
- graphics are wat people look for, so make sure you have a bit of detail in the graphics part of it
-try to cut the audio files to the length they are needed in the cartoon, with a audio program
pretty much thats really what you should try to do, it was a good flash, hope ya get better at animating, and get some awesome cartoons made.
thanks, i'll try and follow those tips. i've practiced flash some since x-mas, so my drawing has improved a bit, i'll have more than one angle since alot of people are suggesting that, and i'll improve the audio.
thanks for the review!
Worht the effort
I found it interesting enough to watch it all the way through. Overall, it was worth the watch. Animations were dull, most of it was maybe motion tweens. You got the fighting scenes right though. Add voices, better animations, and a nice storyline and I'll vote 5 next time. It was worth the effort, so I gave it a 4.
awesome! okay i will thanks!
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