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**FLASH 8 IS REQUIRED**
This flash is about a snail named Dave and he gets shot out of a cannon! Prepare to see more of Dave in the future:)
I was double checking my vision sometimes while watching this flash as the graphics were just terrific in some areas, then there were areas like when he is on the safety net and his head twitches like three times before it turns to the camera, that was just weird. I liked that scene when the snail goes into the cannon and you can just see his eyes through the tunnel that was kinda cool and kinda creepy. The sound was your biggest problem though, i mean i loved the tune you used but it just didn't loop seamlessly. Overall an interesting and funny short.
It has alot of potential but you had some bad scripting errors, tho the queen reference was nice (freddie & mercury matches)
I must admit, I didn't like this too much. The images are quite good, but the animation is not so much. Like when the snail came out of the tent, except he was just kind of appearing. Also, when he landed on the net, it bounced but he didn't bounce with it. It seemed all very very choppy.
The music was okay, but it didn't flow well. Try to make sure there isn't the clearly audible cut in the clip as there was when he was loading himself.
And at the risk of sounding like a jerk, try to come up with a better idea than this. It was boring.
Worth the watch...
Nothing spectacular but it gave me a chuckle. I thought it was very well animated and it just came off nicely. The ending was a bit surprising to. One thing though; that song is fucking annoying. Outside of that, 'tis good.
A short film about a park bench
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