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This is the first flash that I have finished. It is incredibly stupid, but I think that the animation is halfway decent. So give me some advice and hopefully my next one won’t be so dumb.
I liked this, it was kind of cute. It was cool how you made it seem like the shadowed can was a bad guy, but then you changed it all with the ending, which was kind of corny, but made me chuckle. You've got some good animating skill too.
Yeah, a little corny for an ending, which I'm sure a lot of people won't really appreciate as much as I have.
Yeah, the whole point of it was to be stupid. Even I think it's corny, and I made it.
Not too bad at all
You have great potential. Put more time into your next flash with some decent voice acting and you may find yourself making a pretty good series. Keep it up.
its got art quality
animation basic but OK
its kinda dumb, but I seen MUCH dumber.
Short, but good
I'm not saying it's worthy of best flash ever, but I am saying that it's pretty good, nice work!!! ..
That was actually really good for a first attempt, the graphics were great, and the animation was fairly smooth.
It needs more storyline, more stuff going on in the plot.
It was pretty slow, try speeding up the animation a bit, more stuff happening at once and suchlike.
Possibly make it more dynamic, so the characters move around and the background changes.
It was, indeed, stupid, but I liked it.
You've got a lot of potential, keep working at it.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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