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Lunar Ep. 1

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It took me a while to make this it was suppose to have voice overs but that was taking to long so i'm putting it up with out it. Tell me what you think let me know if you want to help me. Please give me any suggestion.
It should bring back memories for some of you.
If you want a better view of it go to
http://www.sheezyart.com/
view/1144246/

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Well...

Ok, no disrespect, but it's seems that what you did was just grab a bunch of sprites from other games and apply them to your own story. The story is pretty good I must say. But you should create your own characters and stuff. I mean, they were blatently from other games, you didn't even change their names or anything. Get a little more creative when it comes to characters and things like that. Also, I'm sure you could find a better theme song than the "Power Rangers Theme". But besides that it's a good idea and story, just work on you characters and grammar. Also, try a more pixeled font.

Good.

I think this series has potential, lots of think. I think you should have a prologue, before the series started. And voice acting too.

Liked

Well although i did like this overall i thought that there were some things that needed improvement, such as the subtitles, i liked the font choice but the dark blue color was alittle hard to read on the black background your best bet is to always go with white on the black as it contrasts the best. The speed the text went by was just too fast, i could barely keep up with the dialogue thus i couldn't grasp the story fully. Also i noticed that there were a lot of grammar mistakes, im glad you checked the spelling but you have to also make sure you go over your sentences to make sure they make sense. I did enjoy your music selection for the background though. Overall not bad for a first episode, you just need to work some of the finer details out.

~H-J~

A bit of everything...

This looks(and sounds) like a mix of power rangers, pokemon and some other things...
I like the graphics, thats about all.

WOW

i like the use of all of the games you used, this movie was awesome. You must make another one.

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Mar 31, 2007
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