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So, here goes a movie I began making like a month ago. As usual I was in a total hype and then got bored of making all the small details. So here goes the result.
This is also my first attempt to make somewhat of a paper flash.
Well that was very unsettling, the atmosphere you were able to build with that music was incredible, and the way you added those flashes of writing in the middle of the flash were well timed and kept the viewer feeling uneasy. The voice you used for the girl was also really good. I liked your style with the graphics, i was alittle unsure to start with because of the experimental nature of them but your animation helped me ease into the graphics a lot easier.
Dunno what it was...
But it was awesome! I really liked how the girl was the only thing drawn on the pc, and makes every thing seem to center and bend itself around her. I really like the style, keep up the good work!
I find your attempt of delving into the psyche of a disturbed female fascinating. It has really given me a whole new insight to your mind. Why you may ask? because i now realise some thing i didn't at the begging of this flash. I now realise how weird you are and how much you should not make another flash movie. so, my advise to you is to step out of the vehicle into a new career.
We love you all. Sweet dreams.
I liked the style
Cool backrounds and look with the markers. The music was a good choice, the dialogue was almost completley inaudible tho. Fix that plz.
Well, the music certainly fit the weird mood/theme of the flash, and your style was definitely unique...
But I couldn't understand the little girl very well, and that giant robot-thing reminded me of a hamburger with mechanical legs. o.O
I'd like to see some of your work that you didn't get bored with.. I think it'd be pretty good!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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