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Well, I haven't submitted anything in awhile, so I thought I'd submit this, it's a 99 second long cartoon about mental music. I thought it was funny, so I hope you do to.
© Jimtopia 2006
I liked sarahs music
UHHHHHHHH....... i mean...... look a cow *flees while ur distracted*
Woah a cow!
the first one i saw was the 6th and i cant wait to see the rest, good job on this one
Thanks, I appreciate it!
A nice little extra
It was cool, I don't have many complaints. I see how you made the characters work, I like the style, great animation...If a little slow.
The way you made it like a character sheet was also good, gave the watcher something to go on about the flash, although, again, it was a little slow and not 'quick' enough.
The jokes were decent enough, not many ways you can excel on a flash like this...To move to the next step I suggest a longter flash with more of a story.
100 Review and-
*Review Request Club*
Congrats on your 100th, and thx for a great review.
I REALLY wanted to shoot the Pop Star. I really did.
XD But that's Jim's girlfriend! I don't think Jim would be very happy about that.
Chucklesome. Good work!
In chronological order:
Fairly nice loading screen.
I don't like your start button personally. I just don't think that buttons with radically different 'down' graphics look good - when you click quickly, it just looks glitchy.
The 2nd sentence - 'Now we've devised....' shouldn't start with the elipses as it should be a new sentence. Seems like a bitchy thing to say, but for me it really affected my understanding of it and seemed jarring.
The character bios were all amusing to read and it served as a great bit of simple exposition - I'd never really understood the relationships between them all.
I still think your graphics could be nicer. (Not that they're bad atm.) Maybe think about altering your colours slightly, adding textures, adding shading, removing the thin lines around everything, maybe thickening the lines up... just play around; experiment and try to hone your style further.
All the dancing amused, as did the emoriffic stuff (to a slightly lesser extent). Dancing was nicely drawn and the way those legs bend was pretty funny.
The ending got me chuckling.
Jim's swinging arms at the end were a tad slow for the tempo of the song though.
Chucklesome. Good work!
Thank you for an in-depth review. I knew that my grammar had to be off somewhere in that intro, because when I read it, it was kinda confusing to me. I've been experimenting a lot with Jim and Co. designs and whatnot, it's hard to make such simplistic characters look... well, real. Yeah, I'm proud of Jim's dance. I laughed the first time I saw it. The reasons Jim's arms were slow at the end is because I just took the movie clip from the beginning when he swings his arms and put it at the end. So I didn't really attempt to time it up. Well, thanks for the review Bezman!
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
GwainSaga - (Original Serie)
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