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03/26/2007 | 08:54PM EST
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Submissions by string227: — Choose below… — Car interactive - charger Car interactive: Charger Car Mechanic DAD bordem madness insane Madness kills Madness opertuneities Madness Opportunities MapleStory Screwups My madness dream Newgrounds Sig Maker v1.1 stickz pt.1 stickz pt.3 stickz pt.4 strawberry's acceident Strawberry's Car Strawberry's Flash movie Strawberry's Time Travel Tech. Windows Vista v1.0 Windows Vista v2.0
this is sticks part 2.i have improved the grapichs,but there still might be fast speech bubbles,but anyway once agin the export settings got screwed up so there might be a few messed up animations.But please the first 1 if u didnt,and this is the 2nd part of the series.
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Average Score: 4.0 / 10
"Nice"
I like it! The only flaw is that you should make the word bubbles stay for a few seconds longer
i know,the reson why the bubbles go to fast cause of the export settings,im fixing them.
"Wow !"
Wow ! Good animation !
thanks,but right now im still fixing the errors from the messed up export settings(like the not moving backround,spelling ass a few people pointed out,and the bubbles)
"Better than #1."
And you made this new one fast too. Well, the graphics are basically the same except the backrounds are a tad better. You could at least give them faces you know! Anyway, the speech bubble STILL move WAY too fast. Work on that, that and your spelling. 2/5
well,im fixing the errors and making the bubble more longer,and im working on the spelling too,that stuff is there because the export settings go screwed up.
"Hmmm..."
OK effort. As previously pointed out, numerous spelling errors. Logic check: it's not wise to throw a grenade into a tent containing a nuclear device! lol The scripting also needs to be slowed down.
yea i know spelling,the bubble stuff.but by the way that was a flash bomb,it just blinds and makes everything silent for a few seconds.
"Spellcheck please?"
OK, first, I thought the storyline of this submission was ok. There were a numberof points that I noticed, first you could have written your script out, or proofread it or something. You had 2 spelling errors on the loading screen, and several more throughout. The only humor I found in this was the spelling errors. It's obvious that your new to flash and still can't do much, so it was good other than it didn't seem all that original.
well,yea im still kindofe new to flash.well,im just new to accly putting effort into it,this is like the first two out of ten flash that made it on newgrounds.