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.:Clay life 2!:.

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And with in 3 hours the second clay life is born!
NOW WITH SOUND!
Again,I am very open to suggerstions and that kinda stuff.
Enjoy!

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A bit quick.

The first thing that jumps out at me, that is an improvement is the background and text. This time the text is clear and readable enough to make an impact on the story. The video is highlighted well with the background and it's a very nice job. But it's still basically the same story, again you need definate characters with names, places and such and an actual story. Why does thatr thing eat the person, where did they find the board? All these things need to be answeard to be considered a good claymation. Below average.

Its ok.

It was an alright claymation.
Again same with your first one, put some decent buttons in.

it was aight but question

how old are you exactly, cuz your profile says ten, and well actually... I believe it.

Why do you whisper into the microphone?

bd1000 responds:

Because I'm ten and my voice hasn't broken so it sound like I'm whispering...

average

lol man that was pretty good but its way too short, should extend it and make more violence for maximum hilarity and make the voice overs sound clearer and it would be really good

Nifty.

Good claymation. A suggestion though: you need to work on voice acting. Like when you said "Die!", it would be far funnier if you screamed at the top of your lungs "Die you mother f***!!!!" (If your not against swearing, even then a more emotional "Die!" would make it better).

bd1000 responds:

I see what you're trying to say.I will remember that.

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Uploaded
Mar 25, 2007
3:30 PM EDT