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A short Flash movie about how the world would look like if robots took it over. Please provide constructive criticism, I am a bit of a novice at Flash.
Update: Added a menu and a little extra clip from the original, which I intended th throw away, but forgot. Also, I edited some graphics, and added a link to my website.
a little bit short overall, but that was a nice animation. the graphics in this one were nice, good designs of the robots, it had a very nice concept and plot to it, good audio, decent action and humour and it offered some nice entertainment. this idea does have the potential to be made into a series or even a game.
Well, kind of interesting. The Will Smith joke was kind of funny, but you didn't really play it out well. The graphics were interesting. Simple, but they got the job done.
The scenes really weren't that interesting to me. They looked nice, but they really didn't have much substance to them. Also, Will Smith disappointed me a bit, as he didn't even make an appearance in this.
Good movie! Animation is simple but great. Music could be better but it's still cool. Make more movies with your robots:)!
Very nice work for a beginner. Incidentially, I was listening to Daft Punk while watching your movie, and it synched up very nicely.
Could use improvement
Your flash was very, very basic, and had little action or humor in it. Also, it could use some decent backgrounds, and the music volume was very low.
It was smoothly animated, though. It wasn't terrible. You have some potential, and I think with some work could be producing some pretty good material. I hope your next one is better.
The music was Danny Elfman's opening theme to the film "Pee Wee's Big Adventure".
Thank you, for the great review and for the information on where the music came from.
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