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I have made this movie actualy for a friend of me,, so if you don't like it or something like that, i know what you mean XD.
That wasn't so bad it could have some music but it wasn't bad... I suggest making it maybe 25 or 30 fps or something it was a little slow. But good i have seen worse.
Keep trying. This was bad but I can see some promise.
Either try and tell a story with a plot or go abstract-besides that-just work on the graphics some.
but a bit too simple...
not that complex...
I like it. =)
It's a cute little flash, but the effects really make it stand above the regular blam crap. It doesn't hurt that the voice work was really funny.
wow.. at one point you said something a bout "nooby" witch i guess is a referance to new bad animators... aka noobies... but wow... i hope you are one, cuz wow. it makes me speech less in a bad way. it wasn't random it was just really confusing. and yeah.. i can't even comprehend words to describe what i just watched.
if you like making crappy animations, don't read the advice.... not saying you did this on purpose, but some ppl like making crap. dead serious they like to give others blam points.
if you want help in flash here's my advice. (more or less pointing out problems)
it might have a good premise, but it couldn't be understood. talking was over lapping so verbal jokes were missed. the characters were un detailed and small. IT WAS IMPOSSIBLE TO TELL WHAT WAS HAPPENING. try to make everything more clear. if it was just a random violence flash.. it should have been more violent and realistic. if it had a story, no viewer knew what it was.
all in all it was a good try, but not a good flash. keep trying though.
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