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hardwork + devotion + will + everything else is unequal to creativty and talent...
i worked on this for 2 weeks non stop. i hope this would be worth it.
Well the graphics could be better.. The voice acting.. Unless it was meant liek that, you should have just used bubbles. And its true.. there are many many movies just like that. Which is why i gave a low style score. Sound got a two because it had some music.. violence for the slgiht blood... other than that yeah.. Good luck on your next submission
Meh dude it was no shocker for me i've seen hundreds like it
the voices were horrible the animation was ok tho
i didn't like that chick dying at the end tho needs more meaning
First off, I like your style. It's . . . anime-esque and yet you did it in a way that is nifty. If that makes sense o.O; But anyway, overall, it was a good flash. I do have a few nitpicks, but isn't that the point of a review? They're constructive, I promise.
* Sound - The music selections were good, ambient and otherwise. My complaint is the voices. They were rather quiet and while the distortions you used did add a nice touch, they were almost /too/ much. The text boxes were a nice reference, which I'm guessing is why you included them, which I'd also like to add you did nicely enough. They weren't annoying anyway. But if you could just try to make it not so . . . garbly it would help.
*Background info - I like the premise of this for sure. But it is somewhat confusing in the fact that it's like, cool this looks badassbut wtf is going on? Did you do that to hook people, or am I just missing something? If you're planning on explaining things in later episodes, please forgive me. :D
* Slight bit of lag at the end - After the Evil Master's log there's that long pause, and I almost closed the window before the preview thingie came on. Maybe just shorten that up a little so we don't thing it's over when it's not.
That's all. Really, I look forward to more. Keep it up! ^_^
glad you decided to resubmit with sound, though its a bit weird choosing warcraft 2 music. Anyways it was good though you dont explain any of the characters, their backgrounds, or what they are doing very well which is sort of needed to catch the watchers interest.
i like the animation and the music choice is good too. i appreciate the subtitles/speech bubbles. Now its time to upgrade to a better microphone. once you get rid of the static noise the hight ratings will come.
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