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pretty good but it was very short and didnt have a story
GOOD: I like your artwork and I got a few chuckles out of this with the wolf tearing the cereal box apart with the cereal flying everywhere.
BAD: Too short.
IMPROVEMENT: This is more like “Morning with a Wolf”. To make it live up to the flash’s name, you could show what life would be like with a wolf in the afternoon and the evenings. You can also add in a preloader.
OVERALL: It’s a nice quickie. I liked the artwork and how the wolf was drawn
lol...wait, that's all?
it's good, for the short time it lasts...make more!
Don't know what everyone's deal is...
The animation was nice and smooth, sometimes though when the main character was walking one arm seemed to tween a little too much towards the screen and his speed didn't really match up with the panning if that makes sense. On the head shaking of the wolf, it looked as though the head were separate from its body. It was nice and short and to the point. Though I'm sure you've seen most responses of people griping about it. Some people need to be hand held through the movie. I don't know how to describe it better.
But you did a great job, IMO. Just need a little work here and there. I'll be looking for more of your submissions.
This was an okay flash. I really didn't see the point in it, but, you did say that it was a short. As for it being a short, it was quite nice. Graphics were above average, and the animation was smooth, and I got a chuckle out of the end. Not half bad.
Going back, one last time...
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