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Great Animation, Awful Length
I've always enjoyed watching animations like this, but It felt much too short. As I'm watching it, I get a false feeling that it's going to go on when It says "Mornings". I was thinking I was going to see something including Afternoon, Night, and the works.
How do I say this... it was good, but It could have been better if it was longer. Although, I definatly have to comment on your animation. It was nothing short of amazing.
Good fbf, good walk cycles, good use of Fruit Loops.
Very short though. But I assume, it wasn't mean to be a full-length short film anyway.
But as it is, good stuff.
I thought this was an exellent piece of animation, very detailed indeed, although:
When the boy walks towards the fridge and opens it he has not toothbrush in his mouth, but when he turns around and the wolf shakes it's head the toothbrush has reapeared. This was only a minor problem with the movie.
I would say that deserves a 10, but i gave you a 9 because i'v never given a 10 and i think that there is always room for improvement even if it is perfect.
very well except...
This was a very very nicely done flash movie the only real problem I noticed was it lacked the rest of the day (not a big deal though) and the movie looped I suggest adding a stop at the end and possibly a short one page credit to add completion to this but its pretty damned good so far.
I liked it.... but honestly.... why is this your only submission on here?
I'm just guessing here but uh.... are you just an awesome artist and new to flash ? or did you just forget to put in a preloader? Well, if you're new... you can download a preloader here from newgrounds.... Maybe I'm psychic, cause I do see some of your future submissions getting featured on here .... but i don't think they will without a preloader..... okay back to the flash here thou.....
everything was awesome basically..... I woulda gave a 10 on graphics if it wasn't for the part where you had animated the wolves head shaking back and forth..... it just looked kinda funnny.... would've been nice to see a motion blur or something I dunno..... I really look forward to seeing more of your work.
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