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young travis is sold to science by is headless parents
but can this young boy reinflate this over the hill scientists
inventive nature this is unkown until you view this
music crayon by caribou
does anyone else find it disconcerting that the boy blinks with his lower eyelids. That aint normal. But then I guess this is probably the least disturbing thing about this video
I just don't like this kind of flash
I prefer easy to understand ones, or ones with very simple animation. I know that you were trying to be experimental, but it just didn't work for me.
Reason I'm writing a review is because of a bug. When you replay, the credits music continues instead of the normal tune. Fix it please.
lots of potential
i really like your style. your overall design of characters and background. enjoyed your musical choice as well. went well together
story could use a lot of work. I understand it wasn't supposed to be a conventional story with a linear plotline, but regardless, it got boring.
voice acting was.. ehh.. i mean.. most of the voice actors did alright with what they had, but... ehh. it's definitely not one of the strong points. you should work on it.
Also, the actual animation wasn't that smooth. obviously making smoother animation requires more time, and i understand that more time isn't always an option, but this is just some constructive criticism.
overall, not bad, but not great; however, i see the potential for greatness. good luck in your future endeavors
i actually completely agree with you
on all this
i wasn't too excited with the final product
but i learned a lot
which is important
but thanks anyways
me of david firth with a glockenspeil. Voice acting could use a bit of work but it didnt take away from the story.
Nice but it got kinda boring kinda quick.
sorry it was boring
Very weird, indeed.
Music was both soothing and creepy.
Is that even possible?
A short film about a park bench
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