Score: 8

"ya its ok"

by: hellgan

date: July 7, 2009

ah its ok but the Author could make a much better one i can see it. the problem was the colour man its a bit strong

Score: 6

"reviewed 3, reviewing this one now."

by: ProMotionProductions

date: February 3, 2009

"Sorry for the late."
Anyway, I couldn't tell what was going on here either. And the characters seemed thought out somewhat, but lacking in dimension. Dialog was also lacking. So imma watch 2 now. "Till then, eh?"

Score: 8

"I thought it was good"

by: OnyxPhyre

date: December 17, 2008

You've got animating down, now try acting. There wasn't any emotion in there, during fight scenes it's not only important to have the usual "punch" or "sword slice" sounds, but there also needs to be some response from the receiver. Get on the mic and make grunts while pretending getting punched. Not only that, but find some upbeat rock, rap, metal, whatever to go with your fight scenes, trust me, it helps. Finally, my biggest pet peeve: SYNCH TEH VOICES WITH TEH VIDEO. With me, that loses you one star, cuz it drives me more insane than I already am.
Other than that, it was great (if a little fast paced), I'm looking forward to Ep.2 when I watch it this afternoon.

Score: 8

"You've"

by: jsandaker

date: December 13, 2008

You've animated the characters now animate the voices. Get up become the character and get into it. If he's getting punched let someone punch you and see what kind of noises you make. Not to mentin they sounded so monotonous. Inflection sellls the story. Animation was great though. You said something about better audio so I'll go check out episode 2.

Score: 9

"This was great"

by: YoinK

date: November 17, 2008

This was drawn/animated extremely well. There were only two things I saw that could have made this better. Some better background music to fit with the fight scenes would have been nice. Some of the mouths weren't in sync with the voice overs. Other than that, a very inspiring flash animation.