Score: 2

"ya dude..."

by: FBFdude

date: June 16, 2008

hey man i'm sorrry but uhmmm...i don't know how to put it to you "lightly" but you are not exactly at the point were you should teach...i'm sorry keep practising like the tut said work your heads the most O_o'''''''''' they look...well..."fat" the chins should be kinda pointy -.-' check out some other tuts like "moosh's" anime tutorial it's really great and everything it's were i learned some basics to were i am now so check it out if you just search "anime tutorials" it should have one ( i'm talking about the one were you watch it and it has the dude with blue hair and a pencil behind him :P ) so it was...decent i guess on the eyes but the head is not good :< decent job i guess...

Score: 8

"Liked"

by: Hamy-jamy

date: March 25, 2007

Well im not usually much of a fan of tutorials as the ones i see aren't very detailed in there explanations for certain areas but your one really did explain all i needed to know to be able to draw an anime character so props go out to you. Your most detailed explanation came with the designing of the head and face which is the most complex part of an anime character so well done. The music in the background was also well chosen. The only thing that was alittle annoying was the font type but when thats all thats wrong with your flash effort then you know your going alright.

~H-J~

Score: 2

"Dude..."

by: GayForGirls

date: March 17, 2007

I'll have too agree with the latest reviewers, your artwork isn't what you call learnable, with that i mean that you are NOT in the stage of teaching something.
I don't know shit on how long you've been drawing, or where you learned manga (yes, this is manga, anime is when you draw manga and ANIMate it, hence: title is wrong), but all i can see here is a newbie who is getting into AS and thinks that a tutorial is good way for starting....news flash! It isn't.
The stop and goto function (or what ever you used) doesn't lead towards games, it leads towards play buttons, and scene selects for an animation. Get the picture?
It may be "easy to follow" and your shading may be very good, but this may cause people getting the wrong idea, and start drawing as bad as you and thinking they are artists (example: bad anatomy)
I also noticed that you only replied to the people who praised you, and say that it was very good etc, (i could be wrong about this, you might reply the other ones as well, but you didn't at the moment)
This shows a lack of personal knowledge and oppres critism. Because of this you will never learn, and will never get better.

Anyway, if you have the slightest intrest in me (you might go "what has he done") then please PM me, my 3 animations i have aren't an image of what i am capable of.
I have the worst grammer but you don't see me tutorialing the English Language.
Cheers

Score: 0

"fushila"

by: Callaxo

date: March 17, 2007

i dont want to draw like that.

Score: 2

"Meh."

by: POOPTURTLE

date: March 17, 2007

No offense, man, but I can draw better than this.

The proportions are bad, especially on the faces, and women are supposed to have a significantly different head shape. Plus her hand at the end was totally wrong.

Try again mate. Come back when you get your animes right.