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Whats is up my comrats? Here is a very very old one. Japanimation Guy decides to be a private eye and helps find missing pez. Will he do it?
Well im a fan of the series and this really was as strong as any of the other ones. The main characters transformation into the PI was cool, i liked the hat you added onto him. The voice acting was what made this though and you use such a clear voice that there is no need for subtitles which is terrific. The backgrounds were also pretty detailed for all the scenes. Overall a nice twist on the usual japanimation guy flash, the only thing that was alittle annoying were the corny jokes.
Just some criticism.
First I want to say, good job, it was pretty good.
The humor was there, I'm sure many will like it.
But there are some things you need to work on. I could tell your drawing skills are actually pretty good, however you need to work on your actual animation skills.
Lip loops are alright, I use them alot, but they have to be a little more realistic. No just solid mouth opens. Experiment and figure out how to do them well, I generally use them for long lines from one person but make sure I finish the line syncing it, so it actually looks right.
Other than that, I can't really complain, your drawing was pretty good and just keep practicing.
Some nice little jokes
Staight to the source/sauce!
some bits have lip sync, some don't. If if JG was lip synced as well it would score higher.
this is great, you should definately make more episodes of this, where even he doesnt know what he does lol nice. Keep it up!
I like it
But i think you should improve your mouth animation
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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