Score: 9

"Clever"

by: Chrispy

date: March 12, 2007

This is funny and clever. What really sucks though is to actually be doing stand- up comedy and figure out the crowd doesn't get it, haha Nice work.

Score: 5

"Decent.."

by: Tambreo

date: March 12, 2007

I like your animation talent and skills. But I think you would benefit by getting a writer. At the very least, bounce your ideas (and script) off of a few other people before making the flash. Because none of the jokes were funny. I realize they weren't supposed to be funny because of the lack of an audience, but that whole concept doesn't make sense to me. If the jokes aren't funny, no one wants to watch the animation in the first place. (Because even the 'anti-jokes' aren't funny.)

The only mildly funny part was the very end.

Score: 10

"Awsome"

by: Terra-Crusher

date: March 12, 2007

I think that was pritty damn good. I liked the joke about the spider. I wanna see a next.

Score: 5

"Not bad"

by: robidoux

date: March 12, 2007

I didn't think it was half bad. It kinda got saved by the last little joke where it's actually crickets in the audience. And for the last guy who reviewed it's pretty obvious that he isn't actually really trying to make the jokes be funny (I hope). That's the point.

Score: 1

"not very funny for standup"

by: Hycran

date: March 12, 2007

In fact, your material seems to only get worse. Its ironic that Michael plays to an empty crowd, because this is actually fairly representative of what would happen in the aftermath of people attending the show. After about 3 and a half seconds they would vacate the premisis due to the overall poorness of the jokes.

The graphics were fine and the sound quality was good, but this flash is about jokes, if it has garbage jokes, it shouldnt pass, simple as that. Why the other ones have passed is beyond me, but until you actually get some funny material i would implore you to stop submitting to newgrounds.

Perhaps you should take the fact that the graphics and sound synching are good and apply yourself elsewhere, because comedy is simply not your forte.