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This is funny and clever. What really sucks though is to actually be doing stand- up comedy and figure out the crowd doesn't get it, haha Nice work.
I like your animation talent and skills. But I think you would benefit by getting a writer. At the very least, bounce your ideas (and script) off of a few other people before making the flash. Because none of the jokes were funny. I realize they weren't supposed to be funny because of the lack of an audience, but that whole concept doesn't make sense to me. If the jokes aren't funny, no one wants to watch the animation in the first place. (Because even the 'anti-jokes' aren't funny.)
The only mildly funny part was the very end.
I think that was pritty damn good. I liked the joke about the spider. I wanna see a next.
I didn't think it was half bad. It kinda got saved by the last little joke where it's actually crickets in the audience. And for the last guy who reviewed it's pretty obvious that he isn't actually really trying to make the jokes be funny (I hope). That's the point.
Glad you got the point. :)
this flash is sure 2 pass judgement
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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