Score: 8
"Pretty good."
date: March 14, 2007
(- The Good -)
As you said this flash isyour first "real" flash and I see a lot of improvement in both quality and effort. The graphics were well drawn and I liked your style of art.
The flash was a bit random but sweet. Indeed you are VERY late for Valentine's day but if you had got this out in time it would be a a suitable flash and would capture the "love" mood.
The song you chose was appropriate and went well with the flash. The lip-syncing was accurate and looked good. Alltogether the graphics, plot and sound fitted in nicely.
(- The Bad -)
The character design might have been good but you could have drawn better backgrounds. In some places the animation could have been smoother. I found it quite rough in places.
This is hard to say but the flash wasn't as tidy as it could have been more... tidy. The menu bit with th eplay button looked kinda crap and the graphics could have been slightly more precise and neat.
(-- Overall --)
Nice music video that... would have worked well for V-day. Keep it up.
8/10
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