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Submitted: 03/09/2007 | 12:28AM EST

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Current Score: 3.83 / 5.00

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It's finally finished! Damaged: Episode IV! Contains some material people may find offensive or something, but nothing major. Watch Episodes I through III first!

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Average Score: 8.3 / 10

Score: 10
NewgroundsSurfer08

"Well i would have never guessed..."

date: December 7, 2008

That you actually had a series in mind...

Episode 1 which i thought was just a mini film was perfection in my eyes...

But from episode 2 to this episode...?

well let's just say i have not been feeling it...

but...

This episode it more feels like an opening then anything else it "IS" to fast but i can catch everything it just doesn't have the feeling that everyone longs for...

but watching episode 1 and this ..it seems more like your working up to something then..you have already started creating your series...

now that you have started doing this and i have watched -this-

i would actually like to see you rival the Xin series on newgrounds if you got voice actors and was serious about this series..

i think it could actually become something.

I Look forward to seeing more.

perhaps... an actual series? ^ ~

Because i look forward to seeing the emotion your trying to capture that i felt in episode 1.

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Score: 10
SlayerX3

"great!!!"

date: June 14, 2008

I cant wait so see epsode 5
give us a feedback about your work

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Score: 8
plebmonk

"Don't mean to be boring but kinda have to..."

date: November 22, 2007

Don't like to tag along with the crowd, but once again, I agree with the below reviewer, it was very fast paced, and it left me slightly uncertain as to what was going on. The animation however was far better than previous episodes, really like the style you used there.

Despite the slight criticism there, please keep making them, I think they're great!

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Score: 7
Nowhere-Man-of-86

"You were on the front page on March 12th"

date: May 28, 2007

As for what I think of the piece, I agree with past reviewers that it's a little too fast paced. Good scenes aren't developed to their maximum extent, and the characters as a whole haven't been developed with individual personalities that make them unique.

Still, the graphics are quite nice. After reading your explanations on how you experimented on each episode so far, I understand that Damaged is good overall. Keep up the good work!

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Score: 6
ConroyMatalia

"Beautiful graphic's"

date: March 15, 2007

I don't mean to repeat what other people are saying here. This is beautifully done, however, there isn't much fbf animation. I think I would've liked to have seen a little bit of that. And it's wayyyyy to fast paced. You can't possibly think that people want to watch the action and read the subtitles + Japanese Kanji over the subtitles all at once. That's too much for small brained people like me who can only take things in one at a time. ;P
Slow it down a bit so we're not angry at the end about how the animation didn't even get to sink in.

Author's Response:

Yah, I see that now.

It actually seemed a lot slower on my machine during live preview, as opposed to export.

I'm going to work on that for Episode V.

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