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This is my first flash. It took me forever to do it, but I had a lot of fun and I'm real proud of it. I'd appreciate any feedback anyone can give me.
It was just a fun thing I felt like doing. A simple premise, a guy trying to impress a girl set to a Weezer soundtrack. I'm hoping to get another installment out soon.
I liked this the drawings were good for a first flash and the animation wasn't too bad. It did feel as if it could have been longer though. Also try different stories and ideas :)
~ DeIvL666 ~
(title in work)
Well it was better than most people's first flash movie. It was nothing spectacular, and you still need to learn a lot graphically, but it is a good start. The characters looked a bit odd. Looked like they only had one giant eye. Overall though, a nice animation set to good music.
...Was great. And so was the animation.
I wanna see the next part now.
A really good submission
Wow - this is a great first flash! Hell - its a great flash! I like the simplistic style that you used, i know it's probably cause this is your first one and your not that experianced, but to me it represented the child like quality of the two people in love.
All I can say is make the next one a bit smoother (especially thier head movements) and keep up the good work!
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