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Worked a lot on this one. It's the best of my entries so far.

So, I hope you enjoy it.

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Interesting for an old movie

cool one

that was a pretty good animation. i liked the graphics and style in this one... they were pretty cool. it also had some nice audio in it, a good concept to it and it was very nice to watch.

Humm, good!

Very good movie dude! The graphics caught my attention more that anything :D. Keep up the good work!

I like this.

And I loved the message. Great job.

not bad at all.

I'm not sure the film-noir presentation was quite appropriate for the content, but it worked. As for constructive criticism, I think you need to work on portraying facial expressions. Your subjects had stone-like features, even when they were crying. That might have just been a stylistic decision, but it was an ill-advised one, I think. You also need some practice depicting hands.

The music was fine until you broke into that Gregorian chant. I don't quite get why you did that. The 23rd Psalm is incredibly powerful, but I think you might have done better to just quote a single phrase. The viewer is just hanging on, wondering what just senselessly interrupted the main drama.

This was clearly a great effort, and I enjoyed it very much.

Credits & Info

Views
2,301
Faves:
2
Votes
9
Score
3.74 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 5, 2007
11:47 AM EST