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Thank you Krinkels, for without you there would be no Madness. And thanks to yoyokilla, nickwood, buzz and everyone who watched it and gave me advice.
What really annoyed me with this cartoon was they dont hold the guns properly.With the uzi's, they held the back part instead of the actual "handle" like part.
Apart from that its pretty ok. Work on the blood more though.
Its all been done
The only real good feedback I can give here is the creativity of the killing. The rest has all been done before, if you can just design your own characters then the score for this would have gone up by far.
But could use improvement, its good for someone new to flash (dont take that offensive, im not calling you a n00b). You should download madness sprites at madnesscombat .com (without the space). Good luck with your next flash.
It's not that bad :>.
I think you got some things to improve upon and if you do then you can really make a nice movie next time :).
Don't get discouraged by what people say Make another ^_^.
You have the right idea.
Man that was nicely put together. The actual animations and stuff were really bad though. There was really no indication of who the protaginist was in the scenes either. I did love that song and the cinematic quality of the toon though. This has great potential it just needs a load of tweaing on animations and maybe a non Madness setting. Really they arent that fun to wacth. At least those not included in the actual series made by krinkels.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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