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- WARNING NOT AS GOOD AS THE OTHER YP-EPISODES! -
This is the first YP I ever made. The sound is very bad and story is slow. Please check out the ROCK OPERA-episode instead. It is better and tells the same story!
*My five points*
*This is not bad. The probleme is that the sounds ain't clear. Make the sound optimization at a better rate or change your mic. Maybe you could also write the things to interact with the talking.(means subtitle) So then the movie would keep it's style and the people could understand what the shiznat you're talking about
*The beginning of the story is awesome. We "well, me at least" can identify to that character, we do flash, we're broke, we want porn..well you know
*Also, put better punches, the jokes ain't all that funny. To help, put the traditional stereotypes icons : the smelly one, the pervert, the one who always sleeps, a lunatic and a psycho. Make them kids characters, not the teachers.....still that would be interesting.
*Make the action go faster, like when the fat kid jumps out the window, it waits too long until he starts to drop, it took like almost 10 seconds, 2 0r 3 would've been enough.
*Final, you got one of the best subject to make a good comical series. It's refreshing and makes a change of seeing serious flashes, wich I do like but it created a wave of serious ones for weeks now, I almost forgot their was funny stuff until then. You're drawing style is cool, not perfect manga and not crappy neither. So quit reading this shit and go create more toons, MORE TOOOOONS! GO GO!
Thank you for all this usefull information... Really it's great to hear what you think! I have now increased the volume and changed the main theme to a cooler one. I have started on the sequal and it will (hopefully) contain more FUN jokes and it will be more actionfilled without just being about violence...
So go see the new version now.. and hear what they say! Yeah!
Can't hear it.
I can barely hear anyone talking. Probably want to fix that.
CRANK UP THE VOLUME!!!
I CAN'T HEAR YOU!!!
Boring from the start
What the hell did Snyggt say in the review before this? Why the hell would I care to see a moive about a teacher? Why do people come out with shit like this?
Ah.. too bad you didn't like it. Anyway I have inceased the sound now so you can hear what they say...
Ok. What I really wanted to say is that I also like Akuma, he's the best!
Snygg film men lite bättre ljudeffekter nästa gång Okej?
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