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- WARNING NOT AS GOOD AS THE OTHER YP-EPISODES! -
This is the first YP I ever made. The sound is very bad and story is slow. Please check out the ROCK OPERA-episode instead. It is better and tells the same story!
Er um.. this is ok.. It starts kinda queer, then just turns into one big crackhead trip. WORD TO YOUR PUPILS FOR INSPERATION!
BY THE WAY, STAY THE HELL AWAY FROM RK49!! He's too busy whackin off to your flash to realize you put your email address in bold letters at the beginning
i love u man!
yo man your movie kick ass, plz make more!
i'm not saying it's purfecte, but i really liked it and i gave it 5(hope it will help).
anyway i read your profile and u, so far, the coollest flash animator i'v seen. U play guitar, me to, i also like Red Hot Chille Peppers, and i really love your movies.
plz contect me via e-mail, i would love to discuse with u.
my email is RK49@hotamil.com
i hope u will read this someday..
don't worry i'm not crazy, or in love with u or somthing like that, i just have some idias for your flash movies, and i would like to tell u about them, but i don't know your e-mail :-)
A big waste of time
You've got a lot of potential. Next time, work more on the story, and try to improve the sound volume or increase it's quality. As well, make the events flow more smoothly from one to another, and add more drama (ie, a close up on the teacher's face when the student makes the jump). Plus, the plot line started out ok, but fizzled out midway, so you may want to consider making them more interesting.
I'm making a sequel and it will be much much more dynamic, and hopefully the jokes will be better :). One thing is sure.. It will be better looking...
that was fair at best
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