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One Episode from a series of shorts that I have been working on lately in my spare time. Please enjoy.
You can view the rest at www.adventures-in-apathy.
I agree; people under the age of twenty-five
should not have sex. :D
Your little "manly" there looked so constrained and suffocated under that condom!!!
that was awesome. Love the graphics, and it was really funny.
Well. I liked it.
I loved the way 'it' runs around. But sometimes you couldn't hear the voice very well. Remember kids, safe sex prevent little annoying kids that scream at you!
I liked it, had some good moments and even had those little old progecter squares that makes it look so old. That must have been a bitch. Overall, Good.
I liked your toon a lot. I have two major comments for moving forward with the series. You need to work on your audio levels. The voice was too low and the sound effects too high. Most audio editors, like Sound Forge for instance, will give you the ability to change the volume and/or normalize your audio files. Listen to a mp3 on your computer to get an approximate level and try to make all of your audio within that range. Secondly, work on your "fake movie reel" visuals. I loved the graphics and the randomness of your humor was spot on. Improve on the two things I mentioned and I think you'll have a nice series on your hands. Best of luck.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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