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Patience! This might lag very much!
The typical noob flash, i started out like this as well, but not with the sticks.
Its funny how you can actually see the flaws in noob flash, amazing.
Voice acting: Practice or find someone else.
Text: select and break apart (ctrl+b)
Title: ever heard of copyrigh infrigment? (or how ever its spelled)
FbF: draw more frames
And make it go a bit faster, raise the frame rate, it already looks smooth enough, so it wouldn't hurt if you fasten the pace a bit.
But you have a good start, you probably checked the tutorials around here? So keep at it, don't loose hope on bad reviews/score one day man.
And if it isn't your first animation but just your first submission, and if you've got loads of experience,
this isnt really good and what was the first episode?
and i couldnt watch it at all!!
i am sadderest...
things you people said about my voice acting made me sad :( i think this flash rocks!
A few flaws in it... yeah, there's some lag too, but overall not too bad.
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
Meeting new people on the first day can be a real gamble.
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