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Once again, I thank you all for viewing and reviewing my animation. Your opinions are helpful and don't hold back. If possible, you can assist. Enjoy.
P.S. The previous episode is "Chronicles of Zero"
it was okay
the graphics were pretty bad and i didnt lik the story that much but the sound was pretty good. u played Faint at the end... tht song roks
A simple nod.
Hmm, it's okay. There's nothing overly striking about this particular flash film. It rates as an average piece. Graphics, well, I tend to give higher points to people who put effort into making something much more fluid, or they do their own animation and artwork.
You're using sprites, but you're not using them badly, so you get a seven there. Style, I usually reserve for the formerly mentioned artists who draw and animate everything themselves, but I suppose spritework can have style as well... There's nothing that overly gets screwed up, so a seven for average. I can't really give anything higher though.
Sound; the only thing you use is music. There aren't many sound effects present, but since I happen to find music as one of the most important things in a flash video, this is where you get high marks. An eight for sound, because you made good decisions in the music department, even if it doesn't fit with the theme.
Being a movie, there is no interactivity. Hence a zero there. Humour, well, there was nothing funny. It was a straight up action scene with dramatic style.
Violence, a six. It's done okay. Not great, but not horrifically badly.
Overall, a six.
Pay attention to this next bit though: What really ruins the storyline for your movie is, since you have no voice actors and rely on text, you need to have good text. Get someone who can write well and redo all the dialogue. That'll boost this up to a 7 or maybe even an 8 overall. I'd offer my own services but I'm a tad busy with schoolwork and doing voice work for another flash series that's about to appear here on the Portal.
Good luck. I look forward to the next chapter.
Tends to lose focus due to half the screen being filled with text. Maybe spread out work area more.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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