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I made this flash at school with my freind, we are hoping to make more, it depends if you people like it.
Open for constuctive criticism
lmao that was the perfect place to put that part ... i guess thanx for using it. It surprised me to see this
I gave it a 3 out of 5...
It wasn't perfect, but not that bad, keep making 'em!
This was pretty awesome, you guys should deffinetly make more, if you ever need or want any help, drop me a PM
Has great potential. I would recommend working on shading your objects and characters to give off an illusion of 3D/volume.
The different shots like the first person view and the closeup on the ball and catapult were very effective. To make them even better, you should learn to use the motion tween easing (I say this most beginners). It can create acceleration to shed that 'amateur' look.
Keep up the good work.
That was... different
While it wasn't very good, as in at all, it was better than a lot of first flashes. Hell, it was better than my, what am I on now? About 56. Yeah, it was better than my 55th flash (Hence why it hasn't gone onto Newgrounds yet..)
Keep trying. And please, less annoying sound effects...
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
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