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by NipplesMaster
by BuryYourFace
02/25/2007 | 08:22AM EST
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2.65 / 5.00
Score Rank: #73,557 Popularity Rank: #117,572
231 votes | 651 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Submissions by tom hughesby (SPP): — Choose below… — Avalon - Cheese (Remake) Pythonic Pistons
I made this flash at school with my freind, we are hoping to make more, it depends if you people like it.
Open for constuctive criticism
Enjoy :D
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Average Score: 6.0 / 10
"my music"
lmao that was the perfect place to put that part ... i guess thanx for using it. It surprised me to see this
"I gave it a 3 out of 5..."
It wasn't perfect, but not that bad, keep making 'em!
"Loved it"
This was pretty awesome, you guys should deffinetly make more, if you ever need or want any help, drop me a PM
"Not bad"
Has great potential. I would recommend working on shading your objects and characters to give off an illusion of 3D/volume.
The different shots like the first person view and the closeup on the ball and catapult were very effective. To make them even better, you should learn to use the motion tween easing (I say this most beginners). It can create acceleration to shed that 'amateur' look.
Keep up the good work.
"That was... different"
While it wasn't very good, as in at all, it was better than a lot of first flashes. Hell, it was better than my, what am I on now? About 56. Yeah, it was better than my 55th flash (Hence why it hasn't gone onto Newgrounds yet..) Keep trying. And please, less annoying sound effects...