Score: 8
"Made me chuckle throughout vast portions of it."
date: March 1, 2007
As always, this entertained me pretty much all the way through.
The start was a little slow, when you needed to get the exposition out the way.
The professor breaking the 4th wall and mentioning the a---w made me really chuckle, as did A-S sticking his tongue out...
I really liked the twist in this episode - all made me smile and chuckle.
Your voices are great! I can barely believe that you do those 4 characters! Do you use some software to make your voice higher for Graham and A-S?
I still don't like the speakonia voice. Maybe even just switching the speakonia voice settings to something a bit deeper would make it more palattable to me.
I did find at times it was a bit hard to tell who was speaking. Crackman and Mario's mouths seem really small.
Maybe you could make Mario's mouth a square to simulate a pixel?
I'm gonna mention your graphics again - I don't mind the cut'n'paste style, but maybe you could texture the characters up or draw them better.
However, even though that would increase my enjoyment somewhat, my main emotion after this is one of mirth.
I really like your writing and it's great how you've now accumulated all these characters that are so distinguishable to make for great comedy with the old switcheroo.
Where were Blue Hippo and Muffin though?
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Made me chuckle throughout vast portions of it. I was smiling and grinning for most of the rest.
Author's Response:
"Your voices are great! I can barely believe that you do those 4 characters! Do you use some software to make your voice higher for Graham and A-S?"
Those are actually me recording them and not editing them at all. :P
"Where were Blue Hippo and Muffin though?"
Disappeared. XD Thanks for that long review Bezman! :D
